Permanent Scars

• Presented in an undeniably unique first person style that yanks the reader into the tangled mind and tender heart of the main character—his haunting experiences before, during, and after diagnosis. The attention brought to the oftentimes sub-par mental health workers surrounding this scenario is much deserved and long overdue. A must-read for those who wish to support and better understand a loved one living in the grip of Bipolar 1 or 2. The author’s unshakable courage shines through every word.

• I like how it, Permanent Scars, starts in such an ordinary, human moment, then suddenly shifts into something shocking and unforgettable. That contrast makes Oto feel real, and it fits well with the My Five Ravens idea of fiction written by humans, for readers who need something real. Rooting for Permanent Scars.

• An absolutely gripping and deeply touching opening chapter! Troy Mott has a masterful way of portraying human emotions and vulnerability through Oto’s journey. Permanent Scars hooks you instantly with its honest narrative and powerful themes on trauma and family dynamics. It is more than just a story — it’s an inspiring voice for mental health and awareness. Truly a must-read!

• A wonderful coming of age story—the short paragraphs are a great way to see the threads of each scenario develop.

• Unflinchingly honest and deeply human—this is a story of pain, perseverance, and the will to survive.

• The small wins are proof you’re moving forward.

My Dad

• Troy has created a deeply personal and thoughtful story that explores the lasting impact of family, mental illness, and the relationships that shape us. His willingness to examine these themes honestly gives the novel a genuine emotional depth, and the revisions have strengthened both the story and its underlying message.

• What I did appreciate throughout this book, is that Oto continued to try to understand and have a connection with his dad, no matter all of the faults he had. Oto seemed to want to hold on mainly to the good times that were shared with him, and forget about the horrible things that his dad did to other people and himself.